s'k

its a gd start, u ood ,make the voices a lil more realistic - sounds as if u were very bored wen u did them
also, try to have more of an idea of wots goin on, not just a car chase
music cool tho, wots the end theem?
overal gd - needs a bit of improvement

NOOOOOOOO!!!!!

GOD NO! plz dnt eva do sumthing like this agen, it had no meaning, dnt embarres urself

alrite

i quite like this, if u added sounds and a little more effort into the background, it would be very good,